Improvements

Have you ever had someone say, "Well, you should look at ...........'s work.  They are really good?"  It happens to me all the time, and while I kinda get offended at that (after all, can't you just say, "nice photos?"), this time I did look.  My cousin, who is an absolutely brilliant photographer, has been giving me tips on improving my work.  So here it is, the fruit of her advice:

And another improved set:

      While I don't really enjoy having someone tell me to "look at ______________'s photos," it really did turn out for the best this time.  Thanks, Cuz!